Chamblee54

Mary Grace And Shirley

Posted in Poem, yeah write by chamblee54 on June 8, 2014

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  1. GD's avatar glasgowdragonfly said, on June 9, 2014 at 12:14 am

    I liked this! Clever use of pictures too, added to my image of the pair :)

  2. This fifty something life's avatar uncheshire wife said, on June 9, 2014 at 2:18 am

    Fab photos & words.

  3. susanwritesprecise's avatar thewizardsword said, on June 9, 2014 at 4:41 am

    Very clever!

  4. Soumyaa Verma's avatar Soumyaa Verma said, on June 9, 2014 at 6:17 am

    A very creative take there! :D

  5. Stacie's avatar Stacie said, on June 9, 2014 at 7:39 am

    Mary full of grease, hahaha!

  6. Jen's avatar Jen said, on June 9, 2014 at 8:02 am

    Totally adorable, I love your creativity.

  7. Jennifer G. Knoblock's avatar Jennifer G. Knoblock said, on June 9, 2014 at 8:12 am

    I really enjoyed the playfulness.

  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said, on June 9, 2014 at 10:19 am

    grease and grace — too easy to mix up

  9. Archita's avatar Archita said, on June 9, 2014 at 2:07 pm

    I love pictures that make space for words.. such a wonderful way of story telling.

  10. Kathy Combs (@Kathy29156)'s avatar Kathy Combs (@Kathy29156) said, on June 9, 2014 at 5:28 pm

    Greasy Grace…gotta watch her! HA HA!

  11. moniqualashae's avatar M. L. Sexton said, on June 9, 2014 at 7:30 pm

    I love how you use visuals with your words. Makes for a more interesting read.

  12. Tweed and Tango's avatar Tweed and Tango said, on June 10, 2014 at 12:43 pm

    “grease is gross to grace” — Really fun alliteration!

  13. innatejames's avatar innatejames said, on June 10, 2014 at 4:04 pm

    I like how you left the reader the job of imagining the characters in your poem. And the legs in your pictures added to the whimsy tone. Nicely done!

  14. Christine's avatar Christine said, on June 10, 2014 at 7:04 pm

    This one was really fun, Chamblee! I loved the clever wordplay and the internal rhymes. I read it several times to make sure I didn’t miss a word. I like seeing the lighter side of you. Thanks for linking up with us!


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