Don’t Have To Call Me Darlin’

Posted in forty four words, Music, The Internet, Uncategorized by chamblee54 on March 22, 2013

remember getting mama in the rain
rebellion made me miss the train
her pick up truck lost oil
radiator fixin’ to boil
I was drunk down at the prison gate
mama you don’t need to hate

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humanTriumphant said, on March 22, 2013 at 2:40 pm

sadness & humor combined in rhyme – worked very well here

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Renee TennisMcKinley (@2old2tap) said, on March 22, 2013 at 7:07 pm

Nicely put together, I like that last line.

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Sam Edge, Writer said, on March 23, 2013 at 5:53 am

That was cool I really liked it!

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lumdog said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:33 am

Interesting use of the words. A sad, but enjoyable read.

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Dana said, on March 23, 2013 at 12:41 pm

I agree, sadness & humor in a lovely rhyme… great job!

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Vanessa V. Kilmer said, on March 23, 2013 at 2:01 pm

Very well put together little story.

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Linda Vernon said, on March 23, 2013 at 2:11 pm

Oh Wow! I loved your poem and the pictures weren’t too shabby either!! :D

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Lance said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:01 pm

David Allan Coe would think this was poetic and pretty damn cool.

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- chamblee54 said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:04 pm
  
  So would Steve Goodman, if for one slight problem.
  
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  - Lance said, on March 23, 2013 at 8:20 pm
    
    you didn’t mention anything at all about……
Draug419 said, on March 24, 2013 at 8:43 am

This is cute and funny :D

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theroadfromhawaii said, on March 24, 2013 at 10:12 am

As ever, I love your pictures. Your piece sounds like the start of a great country music song. http://annbennett2.blogspot.com

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- chamblee54 said, on March 24, 2013 at 10:16 am
  
  It is the perfect country and western blog post. Here is the soundtrtack: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8V1A-u7oo4
  
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